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by Anonymous

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by ballznall6005/30/13

Good start!

This promises to evolve into a provocative and stimulating tale if you keep it going. As a bisexual, submissive male, I can relate totally to the setting and the irresistible allure of a naked woman wearing only CFMPs!!

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by Anonymous05/31/13

Hot !

Yikes !

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by Anonymous05/31/13

Great start!!

you are pushing all of my buttons! Waxed smooth, a dominant girl friend, horny males, a submissive mind set; add a pair of panties (for him) and lets get this party started!!

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by clearlakequeen05/31/13

Bravo!

Really enjoying your story as my wife turned me bi. She dared me,
found the guy, set up the date with a big burly coach who forced his tongue down my throat. At first I was repulsed then suddenly went limp in his arms as the wonderful feeling of submission over took my brain and body. Suddenly I was willing to do anything for him, and for the next 3 years did.
You are expressing the feeling of submission so well and I can't wait for more.

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by Anonymous05/31/13

Hot! You've definitely caught my attention!

I can't wait for chapter 2

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by Anonymous05/31/13

Nice short story

Many women have desire to see men together. It is easier to get guys to do it than most think.

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by Anonymous06/10/13

This was amazing please hurry with the next chapter :)

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by Anonymous06/27/13

OMC. Oh my COCK !

I Am super conservative and straight, but this story Had me
Thinking.I was rock solid erect at the end. The worst was I found not wait
To read about him Being forcred to suck cock.also to take it
In the ass ! Shit what is wrong with me?

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by Anonymous01/05/15

Xris69

Thank you all for your kind comments. The events here are only partly fictitious, but chapter 2 (now available) is the realm of fantasy.

C

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