I had to give you a 3. I understand that this is your first piece and looking at your acct name I might think...not American, UK or Assie for first language because under no circumstance do you write sex stories with the term "thing" or "things"...
I wasn't sure where the flavor to vanilla was until the end. The title is a great pun. Good job.
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I sorry but ...
I had to give you a 3. I understand that this is your first piece and looking at your acct name I might think...not American, UK or Assie for first language because under no circumstance do you write sex stories with the term "thing" or "things"...
I wasn't sure where the flavor to vanilla was until the end. The title is a great pun. Good job.
Thank you
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