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Good idea source for newer revenge story.......
I have a revenge story plan, because I read a similar story, where a single dad became friend of his 8-9 years old daughter's school mate's parents. He and the wife have a secret affair, so the husband watches the TV etc.. When I read that story 1.5 year ago I got a revenge story idea and this idea came back again...........
PEOPLE WHO LIVE DANGEROUSLY
should expect dire results. TK U MLJ LV NV
Close
No blood (or developmental dependency) involved, so this is NOT Incest...But it is closer than it has to be. Sweetie in this story could be a next-door neighbor without any substantive change in the events. Having her be the sister of his dead wife is there JUST because it titillates some and irritates others!
OK...here is a hint...the author could have easily inserted a line where Sweetie mentioned that she and her hubby were trying for another child and was at her max fertility. Then, in the throes of orgasm, demand Our Hero's 'baby-batter!' That would have kicked the titillate/irritate quotient up yet another notch!
Not a bad little flasher, yet again. I would have preferred it plain!
a cheating story with his neigbor
she is now breaking her marriage contract
A nicely written short story
A quick and fun read and yet it is erotic.
Well done and thanks for the read.
Is it his wife's sister or his brother's wife?
Either way, he's not a very cool guy. Small wonder the wife took off.
To lickideesplit...
First off, the category title is incest/taboo, and I think banging your ex-wife's married sister is taboo. Second, the story clearly indicated that she was an ex-wife and not a late wife.
I thought it was a nice, quick little read. Obviously, SIL isn't getting what she needs at home. There's more to be developed here, I think.
Good Story
Ok clarification - Lickideesplit is correct as there is no taboo with a sister-in-law. No blood-ties involved, although it may affect some reader's sensibilities. The sex was fairly innocent (tongue-in-cheek); and spontaneous.
Overall a good story.
Damn
So a divorced husbands fucks his married ex-sister-in-law with four kids in the house and her husband working overtime. Is this supposed to be something hot? I'm sorry. It does nothing for me. Except feel anger at those who like it.
FUCK
To Betrayed - I loved it.
To MattBlackinUK - stop anonymously trolling Lickidee, you gutless fucking turd.
To the author, thanks for the output. Stories all got a little twist.
Good source for revenge stories!
@ Betrayedbylove You are right, but the clueless stories are good source for revenge story. I wrote more revenge stories from clueless husband stories. You wrote me good critic for "The Two Wimps" (Storiesonline.net), which story idea origined from a clueless husband story.
Innocent...
I have to say it is a lot more innocent than others I've read but its still nice to read. ... :-)
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