Mom, Sis, Dad, Bro, God, & Devil Ch. 01

You do have a way with words. Very good. Don't keep us hanging! She is going to kill him when she opens the closet door.

Love this story!

I love where this is going! Can't wait for Chapter 2! This may be one of your best yet Susan!

This story certainly has potential.

And based on the title one hell of a cast of characters to draw from.

Were off and running with the start of a great series plot! Go Susan, Go !

How could one not like the way this story is going? What potential we have going here for a whole family encounter, that is if Christine doesn't discover Tommy wanking in her closet and have him singing soprano for the rest of his life. Something tells me that Chris knows what she is doing to Tommy and Dad and enjoys it immensely, using the excitement to either get herself off or if she really is the slut indicated at the beginning, to enhance her clients experience. Susan Jill Parker has to be one of the most consistent 5 star writers I have ever encountered. Susan's chapters always show deep thought and desire to entertain her readers and followers. You are number one in my book and I always look towards the next chapter.

lovin it so far.