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Prairie Boy

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by Anonymous

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by Ashesh905/29/13

Never suspected you of bein' a Wild , West

Cowgirl , Tess ! Excellent poem , 5-ed .

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by HarryHill05/29/13

Stanza 4

was great

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by Lostemogirl0605/30/13

Coming from the prairie myself this hits home. There is magic in the fields of wheat that stretch out farther than the eye can see as it flows over the beautiful sunset. Thank you for sharing this!

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by Angeline05/30/13

Beautiful writing

and I love how smoothly you move into the metaphors in the third strophe, as if his imagination becomes more alive than anything else. This is a real keeper!

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by Angeline05/30/13

oops

I meant fourth strophe, but you prolly knew that!

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