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To think how you could write the story to revenge or consequence story?
@ Anon You are right, how a clueless husband story must be read. The clueless husband stories are good to get ideas to consequence (your version) or revenge stories. This is impossible with sexual minority husband stories.........
here's another of the WACC writing staff
ever wife gets raped and enjoys it or are to stupid to tell the husbands. This whore was just that a whore. Hope the husband finds out that she's a skank before the baby comes. one isn't low enough but I take it
Legality & Morality asside
It was a good, well written story. Fellow readers, don't get upset, lay back and enjoy the ride.
!) Not everybody has you're particular sense of morality,
2) It is all fiction, not real people. This did not really happen! Hello! Anybody home?
3) The police don't prosecute fictional characters.
I like the stories, but the hater's, ugh!
I wait for the other side readers!
@ Anon We wait for your opinion at revenge stories as well, that the revenge stories are fictionals too!!!
Great comedy
Sex and comedy can in fact go together like love and marriage. Some hilarious lines in this short story.
Karma was a mildly decent read
So I gave you a chance and read this. Sorry I wasted my time 1 star.
Cute
And, it worked! Twins worth of working. Norm was a full-blood Irish redhead, as was Sweetie. Unfortunately, Sammy's folks had immigrated from Zimbabwe
4*
friends
Every guys fantasy, to fuck his best friends wife or gf, wonder if Nancy did indeed have his baby!
I love your stories!
Great imagination. This was so funny!
Just a Couple Thoughts
I've read most of your stories and deduce a general quality I would call poor man's Shakespeare. Most of the bard's comedies are satirical farces with jealosy, marital misunderstanding and mischievous interlopers (Sammy) at their heart. Also, you often write in the third person, without a protagonist or a central character to lead the reader through the story. It comes across as sort of journalistic, just the facts ma'am. Emotion is hard to convey in this style. Just some thoughts.
Not One**
Of your better ones.
Re: friends
Something tells me you don't have many friends if that is the way you think. Fuck what is wrong with people these days!?!?
Am I the exception?
I do not dream about fucking of the wives of my best friends......
A little joke:
The friends dreams on fucking the wives of their friends.
The good friends fuck the wives of the good friends.
The best friends kill the best friends to be able to fuck the wives of the best friends.
Amusing Story
I liked the humour behind the story regardless of the other obtuse comments here. The guy was drunk and in his inebriated state of mind was doing his mate a favour - and as rightly pointed out would never have done it sober.
I liked the story - well done!
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