OOOPs sorry. That's one for 'It'll be alright on the night.' I suppose that speaks volumes about this kind of prose, it doesn't bear checking - even after all these years.
by
Anonymous07/06/04
well thought out scenerio
Well done, again. I enjoy the belivability of the story. I cannot remember the last News Years Eve when a "situation" hasn't occured with us at a large party.
by
Anonymous05/06/05
I quit reading early on
I could tell it was another wimp husband story.
by
Anonymous02/19/09
pathetic
he is, she is and they're better of w/o each other
by
Anonymous02/19/09
Crap
Another lesbo writing about stright sex, it shows, no thanks.
English
mistake
believe you got the charactors mixed up when they went to the bedroom. seems like derek and ian got reversed when they first got to the room.
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OOOPs sorry. That's one for 'It'll be alright on the night.' I suppose that speaks volumes about this kind of prose, it doesn't bear checking - even after all these years.
well thought out scenerio
Well done, again. I enjoy the belivability of the story. I cannot remember the last News Years Eve when a "situation" hasn't occured with us at a large party.
I quit reading early on
I could tell it was another wimp husband story.
pathetic
he is, she is and they're better of w/o each other
Crap
Another lesbo writing about stright sex, it shows, no thanks.
1*
more cuck shit.
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