Zanny: Performance Ch. 3

Sick

Sick.

HOT!!!

Very hot! Lana

made me wet

my pussy is wet now from reading this

AMAZING

This is what my fantasies are all about, but you put them into words fantastically. I came so many times; this piece was wonderful.

If Only

If only we could all experience a night such as this and live to tell the tale - well written!!!!!

OMG

This is what I always wanted, and the story left me...wet and dripping and excited. You wrote it so well, and your imagination is something to be admired. OMG I am still horny.

i just came

Wow. Just wow.
I've never seen a rape story done so well. I've read published erotica that's not as well written as this. I rooted for her every step of the way.

Dr Mab - you are the guru

I want more!

That was one of the hottest stories I've read on this site. I must have cum half a dozen times during that story. Wow. I am looking forward to reading more of your work.

Very erotic, but a bit too sanguine, here and there.

This is one hot story. My one quibble is that you seems to have dumbed-down the whipping sequence. Whipping doesn't hurt after the first few strokes? Preposterous!

Still, you write really well; you must continue.

So Where's Part 2?

Can.t you count? You dumb fuck.

Hot but why oh why couldn't it end up being a predetermined thing and consensual