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Vacation Suprises

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/09/13

Another stale cuck story

try something else-too many of these stories now

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by Anonymous06/09/13

Anon Anon

Why did you read it if you don't like the topic? Why not stick to the ones you like in the gay section..............

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by Anonymous06/09/13

brilliant

great story thanks for that
can any readers tell me a good story of wife away on vacation with one of her gfs ?
husband back at home ?

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by cantbuymy06/09/13

After injecting the wife's mouth with cum swimming with HIV and a few other std's he kissed her deeply and 3 years later they were dead of aids.

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by Anonymous06/09/13

You stupid little cucks.

Straight guys don't do this shit, little gay guys want to watch men with big cocks, it is about the cocks, not the women. just come out of the closet, you will feel better .

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by Duna06/09/13

Help

I have 4 non edited sexual majorty husband stories on storiesonline.net. If somebody who cries about being too many sexual minority husband stories here, he/she would assist me, more sexual majority husband stories to be here.........My 1 story are under fixing and I want to publish except for storiesonline.net here on LW. (I am writting my 7th story, but I have an editor for that story...) However 4 earlier published stories want English editor.
Not only to write sexual majority husband story is a help, but to edit stories of others..........

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by Anonymous06/09/13

A loving husband would not do this shit, another chucky author arrives.t

A marriage turn to shit by a chucky writer.sick fantasy to his pens writing it.

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by seacoastcouple06/09/13

Smoking hot!

So sexy! Thanks for posting this. ;)

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by Anonymous06/09/13

i'm glad you

have no fetishes you sick fuck.

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by Anonymous06/09/13

Pervert

If you want to turn your marriage into a cheap porn movie that's on you, but any woman worth a shit would walk and leave you alone jacking your little dick. Stay single.

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by Anonymous06/09/13

Good story enjoyed it.

Well written and very hot. Keep the story going.

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by Lickideesplit06/09/13

About even

There should be fairly good agreement that Sweetie is depicted as enjoying the fantasy (and, later, reality) of giving a BJ to a 'strange' big boner. This enjoyment is matched by her Hubby's enjoyment of the same thing...maybe because of his own interest in watching a big boner get sucked and maybe because he was enjoying his Sweetie's pleasure...and maybe BOTH!

If it were ALL (or mostly) about Hubby (but remember, it IS his PoV) then I would yell 'Wrong Category' as loud as anyone! As it is, it is NOT my cup of tea, but I think it is in the right category. If Slade had used Sweetie's PoV, it would be an easier call!

IMHO, the setting (including other male guests AND staff) was VERY underutilized! There is virtually NO tension / uncertainty in the contact with the second M of the MFM! This seems to be set-up as a serial (Bull's room number is shared) ... put 'Ch1' in the TITLE!

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by RyeandGingerAyle06/09/13

Nice beginning...

...looking forward to more of your wife getting adventurous.

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by PolyLvr06/09/13

Terrific tale

Don't worry aout the anons. Those of us secure in ourselves and our relationships can feel free to move beyond traditional mores.
In fact, those who vent their feelings with invective and insult are themselves probably weak and insecure.

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by thebuffalo06/09/13

Nicely hot and well written. Enjoyed the read.

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by Anonymous06/09/13

Results Not In...Yet!

Good story, easily plausible and somewhat erotic.

So far, both totally euphoric over the newness of their cavorting on the beach (pictures, play and MFM) and they'll go to their room and create even more scenarios and fantasies and their new friend - just might, get a late night invite.

Enjoyable, nice start. This story can and maybe, should be, stand alone'however, if you choose to continue writing about the balance of their vacation it will be interesting to see if they move it to more than one guy at a time and/or experience other men they meet? How she handles it is obvious, she is the recipient of erotic sexual pleasure. Hubby, so far, seems cool but...

When they go home, is she addicted to a variety of euphoric sexual encounters, does she become a 'Hotwife' and/or does he become a happy cuck? Actually, I don't see him as a cuck, just a guy comfortable with his manhood, enjoys his wife being pleasured and the two of them getting kinkt?

Thanks for the story, I'll certainly be watching for more from you!

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by Anonymous06/10/13

That's what we needed

Another fucking scum bag wimp ass cuckold writer polluting the loving wives category. Don't you think there are enough of you bastards already on this site.Why don't you take this shit to fetish where it belongs and take the queers with you.

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by boaman00706/10/13

Can't wait for more.....

Great story with lots of potential for more great situations? Hope to see more installments!

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by Anonymous06/10/13

Dear polylvr

Nobody has security all the time especially in a relationship and you and your crowd especially are vulnerable to the cyclical turbulence of human behaviour because you have an ever changing borderline. This story only show a couple who are bored with themselves-shouldn't have got married-and stay as a couple until they got bored with each other.

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by Duna06/10/13

I am curious

They are married for 10 years, they are young. Why have not they kids????

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by Anonymous06/10/13

enjoyed

I for one enjoyed it. Nice first submission to lit and yes, this belongs in the loving wives category - shame to those who judge here

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by OOAA06/10/13

GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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by Anonymous06/10/13

loved it

as a guy who fantasizes daily about his 50 y/o conservative stockbroker wife being taken used and seduced while I watched I loved your story and would love to chat with anyone wanting to role play about my wife. my email is fantasyluvr56@yahoo.com

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by Anonymous06/10/13

Haters gonna hate.

This was a fabulous story and it contained the elements of a "real" first time situation when a couple has discussed this idea and been put into a setting where no one they know will find out. I really liked the story and hope you write another one and keep getting further and further along. Creampie eating at the Y after a Gangbang!

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by Duna06/10/13

I am courious

I am courious If this pair was children (1-2 years later), how they would bring up them? Would they bring up the son to be a porn addict hetero 18 years old candidate and the daughter to a 18 years old hot wife candidate? For me this sort of stories are not erotic, but I am couriouse this sexual minority people children bringing up practice.
I am planning a story where such cucolding or wife watching pair will bring up a sexual majority behavioral son. (a funny revenge story will be and I will not recommand you, because the past of the mother and father will be only this sexual minority behavioral......)
I AM COURIOUS SUCH SEXUAL MINORITY PAIRS IF THEY BRING UP THIER SONS TO BE SEXUAL MAJORITY OR 18 YEARS OLD WIFE/GIRLFIEND WATCHER CANDIDATE?
If somebody could give information on my feedback I keep secret about him/her?

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by Anonymous06/10/13

You guys rationalize this bullshit all you want, but if you enjoy seeing another mans cock as part of your fantasy then yes you are a bit queer! You sick fucks actually think we should shut the fuck up about your highly abnormal lives!? Well listen good! 99% of the world think you guys are sick and depraved perverts. How many of your family and friends know you are a wimpy cuck? How many of them know you get off and seeing other guys cocks and are turned on by cream pies? That's right none! You don't want them to know do you!? Like I said you are sick fucks!

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by Anonymous06/11/13

Great story

Believable and hot. Though the nay-sayers are back assaulting you for gay this and that the fact is that a lot of men do enjoy this scenario or enjoy fantasizing about it. Just as it bothers them to discover that in their later years they may be seeking a nice hard dick to suck.

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by Anonymous06/12/13

Excellent

more of the same genre please.

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by Anonymous07/02/13

Anonymous who made the Gay/cock reference? WoW what a "Jerk-OFF"

Dunno &Anonymous this comment is 100% Directed and inspired by your previous comment, I'm gonna exercise my 2nd Amendment Rite! "lol" ! SHUT THE FUCK UP YOU ASSHOLE'S! PS. Don't cut yourself on that broken glass there in your living room as you get down off your soap box, your mom told you about throwing stones!

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by Anonymous07/10/13

Duna, why the fixation on children? Lots of people choose not to have them, or there's a medical hurdle.

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by Erotonaut07/10/13

The first steps down a slipperly slope

Two days in, and she's blowing a stranger. Three, and she'll be fucking him. By the end of the week, she'll probably be taking on every guy who can get it up.

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by Erotonaut07/10/13

I am also curious, Duna

I have read your request for feedback regarding your story proposal, but regret I am unable to work out what you are trying to ask. Is it possible you could get someone to translate it into English for us?

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by 1jbm07/12/13

Hot story

I read and enjoyed this story, imagining this is my wife. I got very hot and horny.
A fantastic story and I look forward to more.
Hot and enjoyable

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by Tim41304/30/14

How did she get her knees to moan? (HA!)

A very HOT story. It could benefit from some serious proofreading, especially regarding verbs and identifying dialogue.

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by Anonymous07/24/15

Hit vscation

We start vacs tomorrow , such naughty ideas

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by Anonymous08/11/15

Vacation 2015

My Wife and I where just reading your story and hope we a similar adventure on our vacation to Cancun next month (September)
your Story opened up the conversation for some wild adventures thank you.

Robert & Debbie from Colorado.

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by me88509/11/16

HOT!

This is one of my favorite fantasies! YOu described it perfectly. I would LOVE for this to happen.

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