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by CharleyH08/30/04

"Sounds like . . .

a Hollywood film." LOL - liked that. Loved your description of the tour, I was quite drawn to that and could completely see the story unfolding infront of me. 'Even the house walls looked like they had leprosy,' was a perfect description. You kept with history, genre references/techniques/tone, and I enjoyed the stage sequence. Noticed some editing things :) Otherwise, quite an enjoyable story.

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by impressive09/01/04

Love it!

Ken Follet watch out!

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by RubiaLaFaye06/03/16

Nice story

Reads like a good action novel.

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