A Little Imagination

This Is A Great Stand Alone Story

No sequel is necessary. The flow of the story was considerably rushed; but considering content, reading entertainment, and originality, it was extraordinarily well written and deserving of praise.

bullshit

This is the sorriest story I ever read u gave no thought to the plot or characters u need build up a u wrote was basically 9ne paragraph

Good little story,

but of course it's not one of the great classics of literature. Very few of those old and dead writers contribute to this site. But it was funny and it was engaging and it was a phantasy of what could happen in a more just world.

All in the details...

With today's problems between the public and the police; it would have been recorded when he broke his nose. Also, the PI's and the cops are a close fraternity. The PI would have given the Chief a heads up on the investigation.

JOHN LENNON WAS CORRECT

and now the world turns leaving all the rubble in the wake. TK U MLJ LV NV

Damned 'cleaver' little story.

IMHO, it was funnier than Abbot and Costello could ever be. You naysayers kiss old DD's ass, probably make your breath smell better.

clever read

See what you can do with REAL LIFE TRUE STORY OF SERIAL CHEATING WIFE. She lost he college instructor position when administrator of college was given details found on Facebook profile of dearbornmt@yahoo.com. One of her numerous lovers was a student she sexually harassed and coerced into sexual relationship. The college administrator also received a sex photo of instructor.

Hey, it is your story. You do not want to finish it, you do not have to.

That being said, it COULD have been a good story.

It was a little creative and original, I will give it that much.

But as a complete story, it sucked.

Regardless of what you think, it does need a sequel or more to the end.

Dr semblance

More bile from the dr, this time guised under passive aggression.

Thank you dr for your wonderful uplifting insights!

Short ......

..... but very entertaining.
5 *

Not Finished!!!

What the hell, use the little brains you geniuses possess and try to write any of a multitude of equally probable endings. The author certainly gives you that possibility!