by AVaugn
The characters fucked so long and hard that I'm tired
The writing is incredibly immature. There's no flow to the narrative at all, almost reads like a Jackn&Jillbwent up the hill type of story. I read the first chapter & now this chapter.
There's no way in hell this was written by a woman. It's totally from the male gaze perspective & there's just nothing to it. It's soup without anything, bland, unfullfilling, not even worth finishing.
I hate it when a writer puts a fake bio&pretends to be somebody he's not.
We all know writing is subjective. Some like it and some don't; however, the profile is real. Thanks for reading.
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