All Comments on 'Jasmine Takes Charge Ch. 01'

While I respect your endeavors to bring Gor from the books into a more modern day, you need to do some more proof-reading both in editing and flow of the story. It seemed like it was hopping from one place to another and I was unsure of the gender of the sub for a long period adding to my confusion. The situation with the alphabet agencies reference just made it more confusing and some back story or information would have helped more.

You liked, "Power"! Even though it was homosexual*, which you are, you still get 1 star.

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*"Bi" is just a cover, once you start munching muffs, lady, you are a homosexual!