by ddwriter
It was so good, it made me actually comment on it. Perfect story in every way, and I look forward to great things from the author.
Your tale teased this reader as expertly as she teased his cock. Pity she never took the rest of her swimsuit off, but I guess that would have been a step too far from her p.o.v. Kept reminding me of the video for Fountains of Wayne's "Stacey's Mom".
Really really good. Like your other stuff too. Keep it up! (Pun intended.)
Please write more about Mike, especially "games" that tests his self-control.
Great story. We all have a friend's mom fantasy so this was fun to read. It was great to stroke to, while reading. This left me wanting more...but the erection it gave me was worth it.
Your story made me so hard and throbbing - this must be a favourite fantasy for many guys - to be massaged and teased by a curvy, almost naked female who gives you a really explosive orgasm at the end ................OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH ............. I need to massage one of my stiff aching muscles right now!!!!!
In neither story did the girlfriend get to do much. I'd love to see just a bit more focus on the daughter and I would be completely satisfied =)
Other than that I love both of these stories.
But did he have to have an eleven inch cock?
It made the story more unlikely and undermined the erotic flow of it.