All Comments on 'Babysitter's Surprise'

Rape is rape you piece of shit writer.

This should be non-consent/reluctance, not loving wifes.

Think rape is erotic? Maybe someone should rape this author's asshole.

You've written some great stuff. You have to get back on track. This won't do.

Not up to your standards.

What garbage you wrote here,she didnot ask for it and the wife thought this was cool.

Now this was sick. You know how to write better then this trash.

What a considerate wife you have, lol. Thanks for the story.

of a story by "Blueboar" still available on Literotica. Very very weak - rape is not funny, and rape victims always have orgasms - and when they become kidnap victims they don't even complain

Write a true story like this, but let it be your daughter that is assaulted by a sick bastard and see if you find it erotic. Sick Motherfucker!!5a

The story was more a about rape and the wife being complacent compounded it. It was a better fit for the reluctance / non consent category. Not one of your better stories.

Let me count the ways.

1). Not a wife

2). Not adventurous

3). Very belated, if any, consent (until what I assume is next morning.)

4). Violates LITEROTICA rape standard

This is a story in very bad taste.

Non-consent equals rape.

A woman bending over is NOT an invitation to shove your dick inside.

Gave this story a rating of 1.

Expected a loving wives story, not a rape scene. Just me, I guess, but I thought it stunk from beginning to end. Your stories are usually way above this in quality.. If it were mine, I'd pull it and cut my losses.

'Hellaciously' was your strongest point in this short tale, it's a shame Nelson's character wasn't embellished more, it may of helped turn this from a rape scene into something more acceptable.

You got me wet. It could have been better but I loved your story line. Its the same fear and fantasy I had when babysitting growing up. Most of the only times I'd get naked at a house I was babysitting at was when the Man of the house was really cute and the kids were asleep. I was always a thrill to streak around a house as I snooped and posed for any Peeping Toms I imagined I had. I always worried about getting caught and so I always dressed long before they were expected back. The one time they came back and I was naked, I heard them pulling into the garage. I grabbed all my stuff and dressed in the bathroom and didn't get caught. Anyways, I liked the story

You just do not like to finish your stories. Another story not complleted. You seem to leave a lot open for more chapters.75