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Lee2012Lee2012almost 11 years ago
5 stars

Just for the description of the blow job, especially the gagging. Not many ladies will narrate a lack of a gag reflex control.

If that profile photo is even close, those are a nice set, but alas, look store bought

Love the story and only you can prove the tits

8-b

Lee

StunningTAStunningTAalmost 11 years ago
No amount of hyperbole could overstate how incredible this is.

Every aspect of this story is phenomenal. The imagery is superb; the details ever so sexy. It's also very imaginative, which is actually one of it's great strong suits, especially in a time when so many erotic stories (including in movies) are so very by-the-numbers. I knew what was going to happen from having read it before, and I still enjoyed the ride, which I think is the hallmark of a well-crafted story, no matter what the genre. When one climaxes to this, it feels like the orgasm lasts for at least a minute and a half, and the quality and quantity of what is "produced" is much greater than normal, so I must be physically attracted to your writing. For the good of my health I need more! :P

josephstevensjosephstevensalmost 11 years ago
They get better...

Another marvellous story...you get better, lady! Too mush time between stories for my liking! Thanks again! x

Just@FanJust@Fanalmost 11 years ago
Lovely as always

What a wonderful surprise to read another story from my favorite fellatrix . I wait eagerly for your next one. Until then I shall always remain...

visioneervisioneeralmost 11 years ago
Hot, so very hot

This is Lucia at her best - beautiful, mischievous, and shameless. The writing is excellent and the action is perfectly paced. It's always a bonus to see Lucia demanding and receiving her own pleasure.

StunningTAStunningTAalmost 11 years ago
I read this again...

I came so hard my eyes watered. I didn't even know that was a thing that could happen!

Thunderhead69Thunderhead69almost 11 years ago
Excellent Story

Once again, Lucia proves why she is a world - class fellatrix! This is a superb story with just the right pace leading up to a perfect blowjob. Well done, Lucia May. I can't wait for your next adventure. RCG

Blueyes7Blueyes7over 10 years ago
One of the best

One of the best stories I've read. Fucking fantastic, near perfect sexual encounter, narrated wonderfully.

CanadianMCanadianMover 10 years ago
Another Hot One

Your stories always get the juices flowing. Thank you!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Utterly Amazing!

I got so stiff reading this, I had to whack off halfway through, then get back to it with my erection half-full, just like David and Lucia.

I would love to hear you read this...please, pretty please?

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I am a Canadian woman with a passion for blowjobs. I love writing erotic fiction. My main area of interest is obviously fellatio, and I like to explore my submissive side. A common theme in my stories is a woman who is initially forced or coerced into sucking cock, but who fu...