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by sr71plt

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damppantiesdamppantiesalmost 11 years ago

This story seems just marginally connected to the theme of the challenge but the story itself was entertaining. I smiled through the purple prose... and the dwarf?! Really. :D The reaction of the writers' club to the sisters was a nice touch too.

P.S. Why is the horror tag in the list?

steve44uksteve44ukalmost 11 years ago
Amusing.

This little tale made me smile, especially the florid prose and the long-suffering writers' group (having been host to several writers' groups over the years, this is funny AND scarily on the money...).

Not hot in the slightest (for me, anyway), but worth it for the giggles.

BuckyDuckmanBuckyDuckmanalmost 11 years ago

Kudos for any story that includes characters name Ethyl and Edith! A fun, quick read!

FAWCkerFAWCkeralmost 11 years ago
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This story was submitted by sr71plt. Well done, Pilot!

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Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...