The Debt

Rated "PFG"!! (Pretty Fuckin' Good!)

Very Nice. If you're American, It helps if you've seen some of Guy Ritchie's films ("Lock, Stock, and Two Smoking Barrels", "Snatch")to get the sense of the London Underworld.

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That was the best story I've read in ages!

Great story....

The racial degradation was a bit much, but if that's what she wanted...then I'm glad she liked the story.

Found this one, after the wedding one.

Third flat on the right, the key is under the mat. :)
Very fun to read your work, curls the toes and makes me give the husband the hot and lingering eye. Having just been to a Bengali wedding this very weekend, the visuals were rather sharp form me and lurid with color. Thank you for sharing. Willow Rain

OMFG

HOT HOT HOT!!
Talyn

Mmmm....

Her emotions are so exquisite....

Wonderful

Amazing, as all your stories are. Thank you.

omg!

it was soo hot.. i loved it..

Oh my. Yes, very hot. Good for her.

Hot and tasteful

I don't know how you managed to write something so insanely hot yet tasteful but you did. The story line was detailed but not wordy and had me cheering for the main characters development from despair to enlightenment.

Did i mention it was hot?

Well done x

I'm glad to say I enjoyed the story very much, despite my anger towards Dhipa's brothers...my god I wanted them to die while I read this...anyway not many erotic stories make me react so well, physically I mean, not just mentally.
Kay so in lamens terms I'm fiercely turned on haha...only my own personal erotic stories have been able to bring me to this state, so wether or not you appreciate it, I believe you've got talent in erotic writing and I'm definitely going to read more of your stories; well done.
It's a shame I am having troubles logging in to literotica, I'd have preferred to post this comment via my account, but I couldn't wait to figure out what's wrong with my login. I simply had to post this comment now.

Bravo.

Seriously the best story I think I've read on this site. Beautifully written and expressive,with a subject that could have been so easily predictive and vulgar instead a true delight to read with simply amazing descriptive turns of phrase. Once again Bravo.

we need a sequel! Loved the story.

WOW

That was great.Thank you.

This was actually a religious experience

That was so amazing! It wasn't just, "genitalia,fuck, genitalia, genitalia, fuck," it was one of the most incredible stories I've read in my life. I loved the ending the most! The emotion and the humanity of the whole story was so intense.