All Comments on 'The Vacation House Ch. 05'

For those of you who have kindly followed and read this series, I wish to thank you all. The ongoing relationship between myself and my Dad will continue as long as there is interest in it. I wish everyone a wonderful summer and enjoyment as well as fulfilled fantasies. Sincerely, 1puck1

The stories okay and pretty hot, but there's so much over description and info dumps it really detracts from the story and kind of bores the reader. Maybe cut down on the excessive descriptions and it's pull this from 3* to 5*.

Still good though, thanks for sharing!