All Comments on 'A Brother's Love Ch. 07'

please update more, this is so well written and I truly love the story. xx I want to hear more of Lena and Kit. xox

I can tell there's more to this story. Well written and compelling. Give us more.

Plz, dont end this. Plz, plz, this is better than any series or movies i had seen

please, let Matt have some happiness. Lena's being ungrateful, just like my brat. At least he and lena should reconcile their siblinghood. Kit's adventures just begun, don't end this, kit and matt and lena, a supernatural team.

Plz! For Matt!

OMG WHERES THE REST??? I loved your series.

what a crappy way to end it.

dam good story, please don't stop here.

I completely love your story please carry on with it.

Way too much drama and not enough story, a three is generous.

This is a beautiful amazing story really well written and i love how its progressed so far cant wait for the rest of it. xx

I really enjoyed what you wrote so far. I really would appreciate you continue on with the story.

Beautiful , painful , real!!! want more of these please write more.. I will binge read them..

While I enjoyed your story, my only wish is if you are writing about an American story, you use terms Americans use. The story is rather a cock up otherwise. At least have an American proof your stories. We don't have torches, they are flashlights. When a prisoner is released, he's on parole not bail. There were other slang terms that just ruin the story line. Having someone proof your story may catch the selling and grammer errors as well.

How the mind plays tricks on our hearts, Leaving only the feelings of love, While never the commitment, or the Loyalty that follows said love. leaving our minds to search for the meanings lost while we try to fix the sorrowful pain of not being whole, for as two should become one, the one is lost without the other. and so life changes from one moment to the next, as we continue to seek that which will make us whole, and along the way broken hearts fall like rain drops in a summer storm.

This feels unfinished, but after 10 years I doubt there will be more chapters