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8. Other People's Hearts Ch. 12

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by Anonymous06/14/13

love it..

I'm so happy for oliver and lindsay......I just love all your stories...

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by Churos06/14/13

Yayaya, finally!

Sylvia's out of the story finally. So happy. Now, I just have to wait for Ollie's proposal. Everything's going smoothly. Or is there another conflict up ahead? o,o

Anyway, thanks for the update. Can't wait for the next one.

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by Anonymous06/15/13

this is great

I've been reading your stories for years. From your old account to your blogspot/blogger to goodreads... I have always loved your work. Maybe because your characters are human and faced with "real people" problems. Sure, finding a family of tall, wickedly attractive Olympians and their equally wonderful and trustworthy friends isn't likely to happen to the average person, but these people are still approachable and flawed in the best possible ways.

I also have tremendous respect for your ability to ignore the pressure of fans and demanding readers. I'll admit to checking and re-checking for updates and feeling a twinge of disappointment each time I don't see one, but when you do return, Ava, you always deliver. Your stories and characters are thought out and the sex isn't gratuitous. Other People's Hearts is yet another brilliant installment in your beautiful series and this is the type of thing I would be willing to purchase for my amazon kindle. Charge me $9! I'll pay every time. Even if I haven't budgeted for it (I'm a student), I'll make plans to buy it when I can again.

I'm starting to ramble... but I just wanted to say thank you and I really do look forward to future stories (if that's what's in the cards).

All the best,
TJ

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by Acdromance06/16/13

You are phenomenal !

I love Oliver and Lindsay's slow, realistic journey to love. I am so happy you have started back on lit. Good riddance to Sylvia. Sucks for her. Great update.

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by Anonymous06/19/13

Captivating

I love how Oliver goes to his family members (including Uncle Tyler) to get their opinion on things. You continue to weave a beautiful story with lots of layers.

Question- what happened to make the Watson and Grey family give up a carnivore lifestyle? Was it just Florence the pig?

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