All Comments on 'God Forbid'

by ajthomas

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Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 10 years ago
How wicked!

Seducing a priest--yeah, that's a big taboo. He enjoyed it, though, didn't he? I think he might just have sex with Allie again. You could add a second chapter to this one--maybe more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Sinful sinners..

A very well written story ! I loved that quote from the Bible at the end, really puts the icing on the cake ! Great job, 5 stars

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