Mom, Sis, Dad, Bro, God, & Devil Ch. 04

odd story

have been following your past writings, this has a bit of humor and a poke at religion.
keep the story going. wish the chapter's where longer.
thanks any how

And The Rest of the Story?

Should have given 4 stars because there is no description of how dad cleansed his daughter - only half a story.. Maybe only a quarter - what about mom and daughter, dad and son?

Duh?

You do realize, of course, that this is a chapter story with chapters and not the complete story yet. Right? Being that this was chapter 4 of a five chapter story, I didn't post the whole story.

Perhaps you shouldn't waste your time reading chapter 5 as there will be no father in son sex in my story. Chapter 5 is, indeed, the father cleansing the daughter by having sex with her.

Thanks for reading.

Amazing

Excellent story! You're an excellent writer. The story will continue, one assumes. Can't wait to see where you take it.

Awesome

Greta story, just as good as a;ways. Keep up the fantastic work!

Excellent!

So friggin good.

I must have read this 5 times or more because this was just so hot. A mother using religion to mask her incestuous love for her son by sucking the devil out of him in the bathroom while he feels all over her. The way you described Helen had me thinking of adult film star Julia Ann.

Different, but yet enjoyable and very erotic in its own way :)

I've always said no subject is taboo at my morning and afternoon gent's coffee groups, but never really comfortable when the subject turns to religion or politics. Both can be touch and cause hard feelings or misunderstandings among the members especially when you have a 20 + year age variety. This story is one of those I don't think I would be discussing with anyone. The mix of sex, religion and the mystery of what is happening in the other room with Dad and sister distracts one from what Mom and son are trying to accomplish. Upon rereading it a second time, and not worrying about missing anything down the hall, I found it's a very hot and erotic chapter. Makes me feel Mom has done this through out her life and is indoctrinating the son. A different way of presenting a story as only our talented 5 star author can, I look forward to more from Susan. Recommend this one highly, just don't try to breeze through it, stop and think and appreciate the talents :) jaybird