All Comments on 'Heart of a Killer'

Is this a case of two for one payback? Most LW stories are predictable from paragraph 2. This ending was unexpected. Well done.

Normally I don't read anything so dark, so when my curiosity led me to read this one, I found it very well written. It was like a chest game. It really makes me wonder if the Killer here was also in reference to Kirkland too because he was ultimately the one responsible for his wife's death and Bernard was his tool for vengeance. Again very well written.

Very well done. Nice twist at the end.

That was wicked good.

Twisted and Dark.

That was all sorts of fucked up... Well-written, sure, but just damn..

Well played indeed...didn't see that one coming but loved it nevertheless...

"Both had been shot during intercourse and neither had seen it coming." I don't know if that was intentional, but it was hilarious

Setting mental traps is tricky. Well done!

After setting it up, he should have been sitting with his house under surveillance until he saw Bernard's approach then called her on his cell to let her know that he'd been in the house and seen her cheating.... and kept her on the phone while Bernard went in to do his duty and signed off, saying, "You broke my heart. I hope it was worth it because you're about to pay the price and I want you to know it's from me. Good bye."