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Coming Into His Own Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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by redlion7506/10/13

hope we don't have to wait another year for the next chapter

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by Yedi06/10/13

wow

agreed too long a wait but please continue... quicker lol....especially if so short

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by PhantomOp06/10/13

My sincere apologies for the wait...

I can assure you that it will not take another year to get the next chapter up -- it is nearly finished now, and should be up by the end of the month at the latest.

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by Anonymous06/11/13

Brilliant

I admit I am really enjoying this story, and I cannot wait for further instalments

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by Anonymous06/13/13

The jump to being called Master seemed abrupt to me. I also don't remember him saying she belongs to him. I looked at the end of Ch. 03 and it wasn't there. Am I missing something?

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by gondaol06/14/13

Same deal, "master" was out of the blue and made me backread to check it out. Also I NEED that next chapter to find out this Valasztott is.

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by PhantomOp06/15/13

Master

Well, yes, Master was a bit out of the blue, but it was just as out of the blue for Thomas. He's still trying to wrap his mind around it -- all while feeling that he's losing his mind at the same time....

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by Anonymous06/22/13

moooorrrrreeeee

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by PhantomOp06/25/13

Chapter 5 is submitted, just waiting for it to appear on the list.

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by rightbank09/20/14

why not

just ask her to call him Thomas?

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