Cindy or Claire?
If Cindy what happened to Claire?
I think a little proof reading and/or further plot development would have been in order....
3 stars. Well written, but a little short of a story and somewhat empty of personality....
Ahhh...Paris...in the Spring! Does it get any better than that. Your dreams can come true! In your DREAMS!
The guy in the twosome at the next table seems to NOT have been interested...in either Cindy/Claire or Sweetie. But C's interest seems to have been wordlessly obvious and appreciated! That part of the 'seduction' (ah Sweetie, we hardly know thee!) must have been the Magic of Paris!
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so, which is it?....
Cindy or Claire?
If Cindy what happened to Claire?
I think a little proof reading and/or further plot development would have been in order....
3 stars. Well written, but a little short of a story and somewhat empty of personality....
The City of Love and Lights
Ahhh...Paris...in the Spring! Does it get any better than that. Your dreams can come true! In your DREAMS!
The guy in the twosome at the next table seems to NOT have been interested...in either Cindy/Claire or Sweetie. But C's interest seems to have been wordlessly obvious and appreciated! That part of the 'seduction' (ah Sweetie, we hardly know thee!) must have been the Magic of Paris!
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