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by Anonymous

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by lescargo206/10/13

I dont like stories of rape dressed up as "erotic couplings"......real perverted

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by Anonymous06/10/13

Hot

I like it. I thought the build-up was super hot and the end had a nice twist. Keep writing.

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by Anonymous06/10/13

Check the difference between ...

'breath' and 'breathe'!
"She heard Mike breath an answer ..."

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