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by erectus12306/07/13

nice Sean

just a thought, take the "like" out of this line and it reads better to me
"endless like windows in a"= "endless windows in a"

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by erectus12306/08/13

to keep haiku

just add "are" as "broken vesicles are" (one "s" I think in vesicles)---hope you are not battling shingles!

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