All Comments on 'Anniversary Present'

Present tense writing is always tricky. This feels kind of like a movie script. Also, some jarring punctuation errors. That all combines to make it a little less enjoyable than it could have been. Not bad though. Good effort.

Simple, realistic, like something you'd see if you were looking through a peephole. I'd love a wedding anniversary like this. It's perfect

My wife read this story, and want me to read it; I did, and we both just smiled at each other❗️My make me promise, not to enter her rear, to only let my cock rest between her ass cheeks as we sleep; but some how every time my cock finds its way to her ass hole as we sleep, and favorite words are, honey you promised❗️And that happen with us about three time a month; some how she’s alway oiled with baby oil❗️💯