Lot's of potential here, and reasonably written, so I'm looking forward to more.
I thought she was gathering up her whites (as in laundry), but then realized she was gathering her wits.
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I'm liking it!
Lot's of potential here, and reasonably written, so I'm looking forward to more.
Confused by bad spelling
I thought she was gathering up her whites (as in laundry), but then realized she was gathering her wits.
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