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by MrMikelobe195211/22/04

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Excellent, sexy, vivid writing. I particularly enjoyed the phrase, "she bloomed" to describe the opening of a woman's sexual organ with desire. I've not seen that used before. While I don't know if its original with you, I enjoyed your use of it.
Hope you don't mind if I steal it sometime.

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by ddpman04/03/06

Come play in my pen

A women's view of a day of pleasure. Fabulous writing. Almost wish we could be there when the friends cash in their gift Certicates.
Keep it up maggie

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