All Comments on 'Denise's Wild Side'

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daddygoesdeepdaddygoesdeepalmost 11 years ago
Pretty good

A little longer would be nice though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Denise

This is an interesting story. And believable, however, while it's well written, it reads more like a YA novel. The build up to Denise trying the dildo was too short and a bit to clinical.

This is just my perception to the story so you can either use my thoughts or not.

Still, a good story.

mizzouguy88mizzouguy88almost 4 years ago
Great start

So much potential to continue the story

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