All Comments on 'Haven's Wood'

Great start to your story! More please.

Noticed a couple of word errors in the beginning, but the story swept up my attention after that. First couple of posts tend to have a few grammar/ word errors, just the nature of writing. Most people would suggest an editor, or at least someone else to read your stories with you. Reading it aloud, even at a whisper can also help you find some things. Still doable with 'shorts' like the single pages, but for the epic 3+ that some writers put out, you need a dedicated editor.

Great story, interesting, perverted and tasty. Haven's Wood Ch. 02 is on my to-read list.

I really enjoyed your FIRST chapter. Keep going!

I'll read chapter 2, as this looks like a story that might work, but be careful with sex scenes involving humans and the "wolf" part of werewolves. At this point in the story, she is completely unaware of the existence of werewolves, so - "mate" or not - the sex scene comes across as sex between an animal and a woman, i.e. bestiality. In the real world, women who do this get put away in mental institutions - you're going to need to deal with this in chapter 2 - a normal woman so overcome by hormones as to allow this would subsequently be overcome by shame and embarrassment, along with a bit of questioning of her own sanity. For this character to be both plausible and likable, you're going to need to show us some of that.

If you don't continue this story, we will hunt you down.

5 stars! great start!! you have talent.. please continue this story (and hopefully finish it before you lose interest)

I definitely think you need to continue on with the story!

please keep writing..you left us wanting more

Please continue soon.

Please continue, i absolutly hate when something catches your attention and the author decides not to finish!

I really like this! Please write more!

Keep writing for sure. Look forward to reading more!

Off to a good start. More please!

Definitely great. And a good cliff hanger too...can't wait to read more

Beautifully written, great story!

Post the second chapter NOW!

Ok yes its good! We all like it! Add the next chapter!!!! NOW please!

<3 Nicky

keep going, maybe a little character build, but it is a great beginning :-)

...Authors POV: So, amazing story so far, right? Oh, well, we can't have you enjoying yourself to much now, ladies!!!!! Commence waiting in frustrating need!

UGHHH WHY MUST YOU DO THIS TO ME? I never expected The authors on this site to be so Malicious.

I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Please put other chapter of story.... I loved it so HOT :)

It is a good first page..looking for more soon,hopefully longer and less rushed chapters,but overall,very good..

Please write more!!

Please post the next part.

So cute and romantic with a hint of sexiness! Can not wait for Chapter 2~

Thank you all for your comments - I've uploaded the second chapter so it should be on as soon as it's been approved.

I only hope you enjoy it as much as this one. I'm already working on the third chapter now.

I'm still in shock that so many of you seem to like my story! I'm a little worried about disapointing you all now.

anyway thanks again

Lease continue, this has a lot of promise!

That was good and I was not offered. Please continue....one request PLEASE LET HER BE A BLACK WOMAN PLEASE !!!!!!!!!!

I'm interested in more. My only criticism is that it's quite odd for a human to let a wild wolf eat her out without any protest. Aroused or not, wouldn't she at least try to push it away? I can see her getting growled at and then letting it happen but just sitting back and enjoying it doesn't play.

Looking forward to another chapter and seeing how your story progresses.

Next chapter plzzzzzzz :)

Look forward to the next chapters....sooner the better....just keep em comin'..and if there are any neg comments pay them no mind...just keep writing YOUR story. I am enjoying the read so far.

Keep it coming, can't wait to hear more!!

Do, please, get an editor. You've received a lot of praise, but I hope you read the one earlier from jpz007ahren who suggested getting a 'dedicated editor'. You really need one. Your story sounds a bit simplistic at times, and an editor who can help with syntax can help you with that. You also sound redundant at times, and you'd have an even better story flow, and these plus the punctuation and grammar would be fixed so that it would all read that much better.

Your story would appeal to an even greater readership, if you did so.

Good luck.

Nice start... Can't wait for the next chapters.

definetly post the next chapter. more detail would be nice though

Hope to hear more from you, this was really fun to read. I pulled it up on my phone at work and had to disappear to the car for lunch to finish it! Keep more coming, please! DW

I agree with the others, you've got the making of a good story here, but it definitely needs some minor editing. Keep it up!

I can't wait for the next chapters :D I hope you counld update soon!

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First time I've read a werewolf story and dear lord, that was hot.

More please.

Really good first chapter.

For a first time story this was a really good start

A wolf.... Licking her pussy... And she orgasms... Can't get past the beastiality even if it is supposed to be a werewolf. YUCK!

Did she change her pants to a skirt?

Keep writing. Don't stop !

I think I can get on board with this. Obvious this is your first story. you need an editor. and I'd recommend longer chapters. But this could become a very good story. And as for the jack ass who posted about the whole pussy licking by a wolf... HELLO!!! THIS WHOLE SECTION IS NONHUMAN! If you dont like bestiality then dont read stories about weres.

I don't have a problem with were (in wolf form)/human relations if the human knows who they are. It is pretty disturbing that she's just letting some random animal get her off.

Though most stories I have read are where the werewolf is in human form, but this is the NON-HUMAN section sooo... yeah... though it dose say your actually not supposed to write about animal or something in the terms of use, but they never said anything about a wolf that's part human... ;)

I hope you make it a very long story .........build your story then add the sex .......I hope you do a lot of chapters .

Stephen J

I hope you continue the story, I've enjoyed it very much.

I like it so far; keep it coming.

Where's the rest of it!! Lol

I have always enjoyed re-reading this story over the years, it's one of those that you can read over and over and never get bored with it. Last week I did a search for any new Werewolf stories and I found a new story called "At the Wolve's Door" by Milkyrose and after reading the second line I got upset because "At the Wolve's Door" is Haven's Wood! It's the same exact story VERBATIM, the only difference is the characters names, I've been on Literotica 8yrs and I have never posted a comment until today, I just thought you should know that your work has been stolen.