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Thank you
I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you.
War Is Hell****
Thanks for the read.
impressive
49greg, congratulations for your imagineering of such a grim snapshot of history. I am looking forward to reading your other submissions.
Author's note
It's been a year and half and I just read it through again. I'm embarrassed at the mistakes I made. Among other things, plus typos, I was supposed to make it clear that George and the older nurse were about the same age, I was going to put it in just as the end with a comment from the nurse that this one was her age, not an eighteen year old like so many of the others.
When I wrote this I had a half done outline for when George and the nurse get together after the war. I never got far with that one, but did this as a pre-quel. Haven't done anything with the outline since.
Well done action scene. Really good.
Too bad it was not continued. Must be tough to have this much potential and so little time to develop it. Keep writing!
really good short story
You have the unique ability to create complete images with sound and olfactory effects with so few words. Your words were like a thousand picturs; it was like being there. Thanks for the story.
DHL
so how did he...
How did he know the Feldwebel he killed was named Mueller?
Normally the enemy is just that, the enemy.
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