Too short..please update soon*****
Keep up the story, very interested to read more.
Nice story but it is too short. It may deter people from following know the disappointment at the end because it is so short.
For the future: when referring to trans* individuals, use "transgender" adding an ed makes it sound like an affliction.
I really like this story and i hope you will update with a new chapter soon
I really like where the story is going and I hope you update it soon!
Where is the rest???
Please Finish
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Too short..please update soon*****
Love It!
Keep up the story, very interested to read more.
Too short
Nice story but it is too short. It may deter people from following know the disappointment at the end because it is so short.
For the future: when referring to trans* individuals, use "transgender" adding an ed makes it sound like an affliction.
still waiting.......
I really like this story and i hope you will update with a new chapter soon
Love!
I really like where the story is going and I hope you update it soon!
I like it
Where is the rest???
FINISH
Please Finish
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