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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
one word

YUMMY!

leann5redleann5redalmost 11 years ago
hotgrilgood strate !!!!

mmmmm grate start e just hope you wrigte more I just love it lve leann xxx

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
It reminded me of...

a very special younger cousin. When she graduated out of high school, she stayed with me for awhile. She started seeing a guy and after several months he and a friend got her drunk and spent the night with her. She came to my place to stay and this was so much like how our first night together started.

Thank you for this wonderful and sexy story and the memories she brought back.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Here's another word....

spelle chek...but your writing is hot! ;)

dgowredgowrealmost 11 years ago

Not bad, but too many spelling errors. You really should have your work proofread.

C2J2C2J2almost 11 years ago
meh

I never liked girl on girl... After kissing there is not much they can do????

kitties2kitties2almost 11 years ago
Very hot!

You need to continue this, have mom and daughter go back home and really get it on! I hope to see another installment soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Hot Story

Love these mom and daughter stories, so hot n so sexy. Love to read more about the two and maybe you could have the daughter take control of the mother gradually and make her into the daughters fuck toy. That would really be hot....

Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
love the mother lol but...

Love the mother lol. But I got confused..they were outside in public when this was going on?? XD

leann511leann511about 10 years ago
Finish what you started

I think you should follow your own advice and finish what you started! I would be glad to edit for you if you send me a draft. I edit for several writers already and write here under the name leann511.

Leann

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Can't twait

Great start. Would love to hear more about this family affar

NealGGNealGGover 7 years ago
Neal - Review

VERY HOT !!

I can hardly wait for more !!

Especially if they go for some detailed wild pussy to pussy fucking and some dirty talk on their bed at home. (among anything else you want to write. You decide)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Just to ask

I liked your story very much. Do you write commission stories ? Pls reply to talk

email : lepnik@mail.com

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
great one;

very hot and good

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Reminds me of my bisexual ex girlfriend.

Love the fact that they went to a Lez club with lots of sex going on around them.

Alex BelligAlex Belligabout 1 year ago

I loved it, but been waiting for almost 10 years to read chapter 2 ;)

"Finish what YOU started" please.

Alex BelligAlex Belligabout 1 year ago

I loved it, but been waiting for almost 10 years to read chapter 2 ;)

"Finish what YOU started" please.

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