All Comments on 'Chocolate Ch. 02'

I am waiting for an update, so don't be too long in posting I am dying for more lots more! I like that you want to have them a start of a relationship first, but get going I am dying here.... :)

It's amazing to hear that you like it! This is the first time I've started writing a story and actually plan on finishing it. It's also the first time I've let anyone else read my writing. I JUST finished the outline of whats going to happen in the next chapter. I can't really say how long (or short) it will take me to write it. It depends on how encouraged I am. Thank you sooooo much for your support it really means a lot to me.

Beautifully done :) Please ..more... I loved it :) really really loved it :)

Please come back to us and finish the tale. It starts so magnificently and leads into mystery wondering what it all meant and then leaves us with an empty spot until you come again. Think of us, your hungry audience awaiting your entry.