A Beautiful Thing

Words

To many wordsbefore the action

wOW

bEST STORY ON HERE..i FELT LIKE I WAS THERE

The Very Best Interracial Story I ever read

Every time I search the web, I try searching for Interracial Erotic Stories first. Well, they're easy to find, but the same old crap. The young White Wife is referred to as "My Ho", My slut, and she's used by numerous other black friends. I believe these stories are trying to down grade White's in any way they can. All of this type of story,,,,in plain American Sucks and after about 1/4 of them I move on, and never have found a good on until this story. I'm a 65 year old teenager, but I can still get my 8 1/4" cock rock hard and it was all through this story. Keep 'em coming Please. I can't wait, and I'm proof that old men can still turn up the fire without Viagra...I'll keep ....getting it until I die, or one of these Ladies kills me. I'll die with a enormous smile on this ugly face.
Thanks
DaShagMan

Wow, how extremely erotic.

Too bad its a story of two spouses betraying their partner's love. It would be a great story if it didn't portray two people stabbing their own spouses in the back.

wedding vows

Angie just commited adultry against her own husband she better hope the husband doesnt ask for a divorce after that
Pat Murray
Atlanta,Ga

Spelling & Grammar

Basically, a good story line. Howver this is one of the worst stories I have read on this site ... Your thought lines are seriously muddled, your grammar is dreadful and your punctuation is appalling - and that is being kind. You should withdraw this story from the site, proof and check it, correct the mistakes and then reload it. Then it would an excellent story.

Spelling & Grammar

Basically, a good story line. However this is one of the worst stories I have read on this site ... Your thought lines are seriously muddled, your grammar is dreadful and your punctuation is appalling - and that is being kind. You should withdraw this story from the site, proof and check it, correct the mistakes and then reload it. Then it would an excellent story.

holy crap

that was amazing...pretty much mad me wet myself ;)

I loved it

MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM thank you. I needed this.

DAMN!!!!

I Loved it ima read all of dem cuz damn ........dat was good as fuck had me wet da whole time

to long

it took way to long to get to the point.

That was hot

I'm really feeling your story. I really enjoyed because you didn't imidiately have your characters jumping in & sexing like 2 dogs. You brought life to both parties & even though the whole point of this site basically boils down to the act of screwing, you actually made this enjoyble & a very sexy read.

thanks for the story & don't let these other clowns get ya down!

Chocolate Milk from a Jungle Snake?

I liked it. But it could have stood a little of his claims to her giving her his half-niggah baby in his sperm as he shot it into her folds.

Best story I have read in a very long time. Would love to read more from you :)

super like.

Immensely pleasurable. I keep oming back to it.

It was very HOT!!!

I actually like this guy....

Most of the time the way interracial stories come out when the guy is black is usually quite one dimensional. I usually read a paragraph and move on. I read this through....moving to Cap 2. Hope it stays readable!