One of the best Interracial stories ever. I am on the search for my "Ben"!-beaugifts@gmaiil.com
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Anonymous11/06/09
Great idea but not-so-great delivery
The whole idea is these women want Ben to take time loving them yet the story is so short on details that it's like he does a minute of foreplay, penetrates them, then orgasms. Detail his movements and detail the feelings of the union: tell what she feels and what he feels; what kind of sensations do they have when they start, how do they build up and what kind of orgasms do they have? Be specific and as the 4 black women say 'take your time." ;)
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Anonymous05/18/10
mmmm
Very enjoyable. Shamefully hard to find stories of black girls and white men on here!
...but don't get into the foursome. Even having each woman separately is a stretch, because women will get jealous of other women, even their friends. That part isn't realistic. That he could be nice to all of them and only them? I buy that. That they might trade him off on separate nights, then tell the next day? I can see that. I realize it's fiction, but let's have a little more reality. You could also spend more time expanding the woman's feelings and build-up to orgasm as well as and especially the guys. They complain about "wham bam" and then it sounds like his is that way. Lot of potential but needs more fleshing out.
English
MMMM!!
Totally Yum!! Very nice! Perhaps a sequel?
WOW
One of the best Interracial stories ever. I am on the search for my "Ben"!-beaugifts@gmaiil.com
Great idea but not-so-great delivery
The whole idea is these women want Ben to take time loving them yet the story is so short on details that it's like he does a minute of foreplay, penetrates them, then orgasms. Detail his movements and detail the feelings of the union: tell what she feels and what he feels; what kind of sensations do they have when they start, how do they build up and what kind of orgasms do they have? Be specific and as the 4 black women say 'take your time." ;)
mmmm
Very enjoyable. Shamefully hard to find stories of black girls and white men on here!
Wow
That was hot! 5
That is pretty much my ultimate fantasy...
Without the unnecessary drug. :D This is one of the hottest series I've ever read. Damn hot! 5 HUGE Stars!
I like the idea...
...but don't get into the foursome. Even having each woman separately is a stretch, because women will get jealous of other women, even their friends. That part isn't realistic. That he could be nice to all of them and only them? I buy that. That they might trade him off on separate nights, then tell the next day? I can see that. I realize it's fiction, but let's have a little more reality. You could also spend more time expanding the woman's feelings and build-up to orgasm as well as and especially the guys. They complain about "wham bam" and then it sounds like his is that way. Lot of potential but needs more fleshing out.
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