The story of the devil and how to remove it is indeed hot.Spiritual
Goodness,devil,god and the devil to be removed is exciting and also gives a new description of an institution(Catholic Church), that abused it so much ,not by the above story at all. But the Father's,Brother's sometimes abused Nuns which is a fact,and well written by SJP. Waiting to read more
This is definitely one of my favorite stories I've read of yours. I look forward to any and all of your stories. including the religiously satirized ones. You are just too good a writer Susan...
Superb Ending! I loved it, one of Susan's Best Chapters. A big Surprise!
What a fantastic climax to a very different, yet right on the mark chapter to another great series! After struggling a bit through chapter 4, I looked at this one as a whole new experience, similar to other fiction, non-fiction, historic or biographical books. IE: you don't always like every chapter or the way the writer feels or presents, but you enjoy the whole book. This is the case here and if you read carefully, there is a message as often happens with Susan. I got it in the ending, you will too even if you need to re read the whole series, which might be a good idea to take in the hot scenes again. Five Star material and another favorite story. I welcome reading another of Susan's entries soon, sometimes even reading some others just to appreciate a professional writers expertise as we have with Ms. Parker. :) jaybird
English
So perverted
and again so hot. Thank you Susan Jill Parker.
You stories under all your names are so vivid.
LONG LIVE Susan
Wow! Burning up my Ipad reading it!
Creative Devil
The story of the devil and how to remove it is indeed hot.Spiritual
Goodness,devil,god and the devil to be removed is exciting and also gives a new description of an institution(Catholic Church), that abused it so much ,not by the above story at all. But the Father's,Brother's sometimes abused Nuns which is a fact,and well written by SJP. Waiting to read more
One of your best
This is definitely one of my favorite stories I've read of yours. I look forward to any and all of your stories. including the religiously satirized ones. You are just too good a writer Susan...
Superb Ending! I loved it, one of Susan's Best Chapters. A big Surprise!
What a fantastic climax to a very different, yet right on the mark chapter to another great series! After struggling a bit through chapter 4, I looked at this one as a whole new experience, similar to other fiction, non-fiction, historic or biographical books. IE: you don't always like every chapter or the way the writer feels or presents, but you enjoy the whole book. This is the case here and if you read carefully, there is a message as often happens with Susan. I got it in the ending, you will too even if you need to re read the whole series, which might be a good idea to take in the hot scenes again. Five Star material and another favorite story. I welcome reading another of Susan's entries soon, sometimes even reading some others just to appreciate a professional writers expertise as we have with Ms. Parker. :) jaybird
fantastic story
Please Lord let me find a branch of this church so I can be there every day.
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