You had my full attention, especially with details. Like when she went into the next stall, and described her uncertainty about what to do next. And who she saw on the way out of the club. Rich and thick. Delicious to read.
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I love your writing style, it's so intricate, and the inner monologue fits perfectly with the action, characterization, and themes.
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I enjoyed the read. You write well so by all means continue posting.
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Great story.....reluctant Hot Bitch overcome with the desire to submit.....please continue.
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That was fantastic. Incredibly well written too. Id love to see where this is going. Also thanks for the butch. Cant get enough of them :)
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You had my full attention, especially with details. Like when she went into the next stall, and described her uncertainty about what to do next. And who she saw on the way out of the club. Rich and thick. Delicious to read.
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I love your writing style, it's so intricate, and the inner monologue fits perfectly with the action, characterization, and themes.
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