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Great Story
I've read this story elsewhere and think it may be your best story ever. Thanks for putting on Literotica.
Boyd
Powerful Opening
From here we go on a long and interesting trip.
Beautiful story.
Well done and lyrical. Very very nice.
Just garbage !
Typical British talentless drivel. "1*" !
Another gem in the making!
Obviously our Anonymous commentator below has no sense of atmosphere. I have read all your other stories, and have just started with this series. You have depicted a typical lifetime railwayman very well indeed.
I also like your use of the occasional real place-name, which helps to "place" the story. Those of us who have an interest in railways/Britain can relate to the places and the events in your stories, as in "Echoes".
Keep up the good work!
Nick
Oops!
I should have said that I have read all your Romance Stories - but if Abby is any guide, your stories in other categories will be well worth a look.
Nick
speaking of drivel
annoyingmousie 01/12/14 is proof that us Jonathans are failing to enforce our laws against incestuous reproduction among the right-voting jukes & kallikacks that infest our land with with cretinous progeny.
Different
The beginning chapter reads like it is the end of the story.
A painting with words.
Here I am,sitting in India,and the moment I close my eyes the station of Combe Lyney comes alive. And there stands Thomas Tregonney checking his watch for the train to depart.
I can't think of any better way to appreciate this excellent offering of yours.
A painting with a fecal matter !
That is all it is.1* !!
an ominous beginning
I fear the track removal crew will find an unpleasant surprise in January.
Dear readers:
do not let the darkness of this first chapter put you off reading the rest of the series. It gets better and better as the chapters roll on. You will be well rewarded for following the path Kezza67 is creating.
you haven't even met Abby yet. give her a chance, you will like her.
Sick garbage by degenerate Brit faggot ! "1*" !!
But aren't they all ??
A VERY DEDICATED EMPLOY
all the way to the end of the line, all aboard, TK U MLJ LV NV
A poignant narrative
This is one of the most moving accounts of a dedicated employee I've ever read. Thank You. Don't be discouraged by the moonbrains.
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