Falling asleep for eight hours while your plaything is cuffed to the bed with his face smothered in your clothing is a pretty dumb move. What if he starts choking on something? How does one explain his asphyxiation to the police? Oh, we were fooling around with bondage and it was an accident? It would be gross negligence if she has medical training -- she should know better. Is there even a safe word? I know this is only a story, but some readers might try out this type of fantasy, possibly with disastrous results. Well-written but dangerous, no disclaimer. One star only.
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Anonymous06/15/13
I agree that this would be risky in real life, but it's not real life. So in my opinion it doesn't have much bearing on how the story should be rated, though to each their own of course. I think the burden is on the reader not to just assume things are safe though, the writer shouldn't have to point out the obvious. I mean lots of things in stories could be done safely in real life, but then lots of other things are not safe. So people need to have common sense when playing and educate themselves about risks. What someone writes in a story shouldn't have any bearing on the activities people do in reality.
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Anonymous06/16/13
dumbass...
She doesn't care that it's risky b/c she obviously doesn't care one iota about the guy.
Yes, this wouldn't be right in real life, with the risks and the lack of consent. But it's a fantasy, and a fine one. I love the panties around the face part in particular.
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Anonymous08/17/13
So implausible
its laughable.
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Anonymous11/22/13
This wasn't sexy
It was a total bitch, being just that - a bitch. The part that made for the lousy story was that he stuck around. Guys have pride and egos. She was screwing with his. He would have been long gone. Who would stay with a cunt like that? Ridiculous, implausible story, even for fiction. And the dialogue? It sounded like 6 year olds arguing.
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Anonymous12/18/13
Yes this is fiction - fantasy
But do you ever stop to think what might really happen at the end of any of your stories? You seem to always have a crazy woman abusing some hapless man that for some reason you never explain, seems to put up with the torture. But when the men come to the end of their ropes don't you think that it would end badly for the women? Broken bones, crushed ribs, hospital visits, jail time or a more final solution, the morgue? I've only read three of your stories and that will be enough as the themes and outcomes are always the same. I find them to be universally poorly written, lacking in any kind of cleverness and just downright disgusting.
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Anonymous01/25/14
She's a sadistic, manipulative bitch
Why would he or anyone else for that matter, stick around?
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Pretty risky
Falling asleep for eight hours while your plaything is cuffed to the bed with his face smothered in your clothing is a pretty dumb move. What if he starts choking on something? How does one explain his asphyxiation to the police? Oh, we were fooling around with bondage and it was an accident? It would be gross negligence if she has medical training -- she should know better. Is there even a safe word? I know this is only a story, but some readers might try out this type of fantasy, possibly with disastrous results. Well-written but dangerous, no disclaimer. One star only.
I agree that this would be risky in real life, but it's not real life. So in my opinion it doesn't have much bearing on how the story should be rated, though to each their own of course. I think the burden is on the reader not to just assume things are safe though, the writer shouldn't have to point out the obvious. I mean lots of things in stories could be done safely in real life, but then lots of other things are not safe. So people need to have common sense when playing and educate themselves about risks. What someone writes in a story shouldn't have any bearing on the activities people do in reality.
dumbass...
She doesn't care that it's risky b/c she obviously doesn't care one iota about the guy.
Love it!
Yes, this wouldn't be right in real life, with the risks and the lack of consent. But it's a fantasy, and a fine one. I love the panties around the face part in particular.
So implausible
its laughable.
This wasn't sexy
It was a total bitch, being just that - a bitch. The part that made for the lousy story was that he stuck around. Guys have pride and egos. She was screwing with his. He would have been long gone. Who would stay with a cunt like that? Ridiculous, implausible story, even for fiction. And the dialogue? It sounded like 6 year olds arguing.
Yes this is fiction - fantasy
But do you ever stop to think what might really happen at the end of any of your stories? You seem to always have a crazy woman abusing some hapless man that for some reason you never explain, seems to put up with the torture. But when the men come to the end of their ropes don't you think that it would end badly for the women? Broken bones, crushed ribs, hospital visits, jail time or a more final solution, the morgue? I've only read three of your stories and that will be enough as the themes and outcomes are always the same. I find them to be universally poorly written, lacking in any kind of cleverness and just downright disgusting.
She's a sadistic, manipulative bitch
Why would he or anyone else for that matter, stick around?
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