Enough Retribution?

Thanks***

For the read.

Oh Yeah

All cheaters deserve to be treated as such. Or worse.

HA Ha ha

Enjoyed it

Thanks for the offering.

Ta very much! 5* short

and to the point!

Good read.

LOL!!

Interesting revenge!!!

Fascinating example of a Flash Story

I agree that he got retribution on them and at least it seems to better than Grievous Bodily Harm, though I am sure that he could be charged with all sorts of things even if he was using a toy weapon to impose his will. That is the crux of the problem of revenge, especially since to be a good revenge, the deserving bugger needs to know that you are responsible. I am happy that I never felt the need for revenge....

THE ANSWER IS!!!!!!

we don't think so. TK U MLJ LV NV

LOL

Great quick read - No violence just utter humiliation. Loved it.

A great laugh!

Thanks for the early morning chuckles. I enjoyed this one a lot. 5 Stars. :)

Bruce22

You Sir, are a wimp and a pussy.

Entertaining Little Story

Five stars - mission accomplished with this little flash story. Well done.

Please read the damn story

In reply to the few people who say our hero would have been arrested for carrying a weapon.....HE HAD PUT THE DAMN THING IN HIS PACK BEFORE HE STARTED WALKING DOWN THE STREET.....I ain't completely fucking stupid lol

Good Stuff

The stated goal was 750 words, and a reasonbly good tale. You did it.

Love Short Stories

and Your's was one of the Best. Loved the Revenge No Broken Laws and No Broken Body Parts... just Alot of Shame for both Offenders.

I enjoyed

I enjoyed you comment, almost as much as the story. Never ceases to amaze me, that people spout off, before comprehending. It is plainy in there, not to mention, you even had that, it was an, "imitation souvenir weapon". Hmmmm..... LOL

Okay, the story was cute, but...

No broken laws? Handcuffing them is illegal restraint; forcing them to walk down the street nude is assault and battery, and possibly kidnapping. If they were observed by a minor he is guilty of contributing to the delinquency of a minor. Showing the the gun, even if it was not real but only perceived as such, is assault with a deadly weapon. I'm sure I could come up with a few more if I wasn't so tired.

Very tightly written

Nicely done !

A complete and interesting short story, which is very uncommon and hard to do.

Thanks for the read.

Nice Little Flash Story

Nice fantasy. No blood was shed much to the dismay of the BTB crowd. Okay by me. The protagonist apparently was good with the results and so I'm I for this tale.

Tar and feather the cheaters in your next story.

Thank you for sharing this with us.

Oh yeah -

Short, sweet, complete -

OUTSTANDING

NUFF SAID

Good

Well written but a couple of points bothered me somewhat: -
1. I don't know of any army these days that allow their soldiers to take weapons home with them when they go on leave. Just imagine the panic it would cause on any public transport used.
2. Ok, given in this case he had a weapon, I still don't understand the cheaters willingness to be so submissive, a weapon, he may have but ammo, no way would that ever happen these days.
Still a good enjoyable read. 4 ****

@kdcee79

There are only 750 words.

I guess you skimmed right over the part that says "imitation souvenir weapon".

If you don't read the whole story, you shouldn't comment.

nice work

A little short, but still a nice story. I like the fact that instead of being one of those guys who " get turned on " by watching and what some one would really do is refreshing.

lol

I loved the story every frigging bit of it

well played

your goals of crafting a story we could enjoy in no more than 750 were more than met.

HOW MUCH IS TOO MUCH

and the decision rests with the catcher. TK U MLJ LV NV

Yeah

All cheaters suck. There's a special place in hell for all of them.

Well done

I did the 750 word thing a while back and therefore know that it isn't easy.

as has been said before.

Soldiers do not have weapons when they are on Leave or away from base.

Apart from that a nice story.

HOW MUCH IS TOO MUCH

or when is enough enough/ TK U MLJ LV NV

I loved!....well played1

Te author did great on this story.
This story is very creative, well written and good context.
Congrats to the author!