All Comments on 'The Artist's Frustration'

Pablo Picasso on the make

I shall file these words for future use

your poem - excellent, a bit too prosy

the art, interesting, I see the old man's face mirrored

true 5

I recommended in new poems, sorry for the delay

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?p=46854082#post46854082

Your poem very much reminds me of a dramatic monologue, wherein the narrator tells a story and reveals him or herself in the process. Your old man does that and for that reason I don't think you need the last four lines: his love is implied throughout the poem so why explain it at the end?

You have a great narrative flair and your poem is very engaging to me as a reader. Come check out the poetry feedback and discussion forum if you like to write poems and want to hang out with others who do. :-)

Just my opinion of course and thanks for a wonderful read!