hot!!!!!!!!!
needs an editor.
yeah it needs work. it was my first attempt and unedited....
Its a good story but another chapter working on their "physical relationship" would be great. (dare I suggest a very happy ending )
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hot!!!!!!!!!
Hot, but...
needs an editor.
yeah it needs work. it was my first attempt and unedited....
Its a good story but another chapter working on their "physical relationship" would be great. (dare I suggest a very happy ending )
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to A Night Away With Katie or
More submissions by shanec123.