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Tessa And Tom, Two Of A Kind Ch. 01

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by wax_wings06/19/13

Great start!

Looking forward to future chapters. Not too many mistakes, but I would suggest working on the flow of the story.

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by Anonymous06/19/13

Nice!!!

I liked it, Also looking forward to more!!! :)

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by Ternom06/23/13

I like it! Definitely looking forward to more.

Especially as Tom is now defenceless :-)

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by Anonymous07/09/13

Right up with succubus summoning

Nice!

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by Anonymous07/09/13

Good story but a bit short

Good story but a bit short, work on the flow and natural speaking more.

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by Anonymous10/20/13

dull

Dry, no emotion whatsoever. The person who wrote this story seems to have a thing for thrust-till-you-cum sex.

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