All Comments on 'Vanessa & Danny'

I like it. Very sweet. I don't know how realistic it is, but you wrote it well.

I really liked it, i wish i could have joined them XD

I really liked this one, thanks for sharing it.

The first paragraph us a bit strange, " considered the popular girl, the one with the thick blond hair, jade green eyes and perfect skin." It comes across like all popular girls look this way. There is an over use of the word 'and' throughout the entire story.