All Comments on 'Tony Stops By Ch. 02'

She wants to be with Tony, why in the world would her husband just lay there and pretend he didn't know....why try to keep a broken marriage? Come on, not another wimp husband story, some consequences for them all if you please.

Including the two from today All concern the wife cuckolding the husband. The stories are pretty well written but are all thea same. In this story the marriage is over and Jack should head for the hills. Will not read you in the fiuture. Not my cup of tea

Hey, other commenter -- so it's not your flavor. Get over it.

Humiliation fantasy exactly. Is that not a fetish you moron. Im sure your sucking someone else out of your significant other.So have at it and BTW get over it

You might get some better feedback if you put it in the fetish section, not a fan.

as well get them both drunk and burn the house down with them in it collect the insurance and get a new wife with that particular rival dead

Same thing goes for those who relish in this sort of slop.

Monkeytail ? No, reads more like it was written by a monkey's arse

If the guy telling the story was a little more manly, hadn't gotten an erection or cum, and it was followed up by some decisive retribution for the cheaters. As it was, it was crap. Just a wimpy cuck, who no doubt will do nothing.

Enjoy the fact that everyone had a good time. Nothing wrong with that. Also, if the wife is that good of a fuck, pass her around a little more. I bet that other guys would also enjoy fucking her.

Maybe you might even get some new pussy for yourself. My husband does every now and again.

Last comment was moronic. Canyon! You act as if the husband approved of her fucking Tony. This was cheating you pinhead. This was a case of a slut wife cucking her husband and your comment was as if he wanted this to happen. Did you read the story? Idiot But then mmaybe this is the way you treat your husband.

I hope Tony bangs the slut in the ass next. 4*

Stupid and lame plot line

Like most of these stories when he said "I do" he cock shank to half its size, he lost all knowledge and abilities to make love, and his balls turned into tiny decorative tings with no purpose.

Like so many other wacc writers the story ends right were the tension in the plot builds.

Do you have so little respect for women that you think this is how they act? Just because a woman may have big tits does not mean I HAVE to fuck her. So why would women act like that?

Your stories suck.

I watch my wife fuck my best friend one night. It was the most erotic sight I've seen. She later fucked him many times over the next few months with my permission. I loved to hear about their escapades and fuck her wet pussy afterwards. I was fucking two different women at the same time so we both have our flings. We have now been happily married 29 years so it did not damage our relationship. You guys that claim this is a disaster in the making are either jealous or prudes. So, quit reading these type stories.

sick sick sick

telling everybody he watches his best friend screw his wife, one thing is for sure your not his best friend you loser.

Since your nothing but a fucking wimp I supplest you suck your cumm out of your shorts then go suck offyour wife's lover before letting him fuck you in the ass

Think he should just tell her to leave with tony and never come back. just don't trust her as she let tony fill her pussy with his jizz not thinking about what could happen if she gets PG and how her man would feel about it as he would be know as a cuckholed. So lets have the next part and lets see if she understands what she did to her love

Fantastic story!!!!!!!!!

Thanks!!!

Enjoyed the story, I think Jack should say nothing to the wife and just continue to secretly observe her behavior a bit more. Great story !

You know the saying with freinds like these who needs...... Might as well ditch the slut ax well

Man, try for some originality. Either that, or put these tales in Fetish. That's where they really belong. Good writing, though.

My main complaint is Hubby acting like a wimp. Kick Asshole's ass, and divorce wifey. It's a no-brainer.

Hope he doesn't say anything to his wife. Hope the wife gets hooked on the friend's big cock. :)

Same old shit, different day.

What a pathetic loser!!!

Continue with this story!!! I love how you had the husband watch them while they carelessly fucked outside.

Fuck the haters and do more great chapters like this one!!!

Where is part 3.....stop teasing us lets get it posted.....

I really wish people would leave their retarded comments to themselves. I liked the story and thought it was well written. Yes it is a story of a woman who cheated. I like that the ending was left open so that it can go either way. I wish people would stop reading stories from the Loving Wives section if they don't want to read about cheating or cuckolds. Not all cheating stories have to end in raging vengeance and Hell Fire. Half of the time the retribution in those stories are so unbelievable that I can't even be satisfied that the slut got what she deserves. There are MILLIONS of people who get cheated on everyday that just have to learn to deal with it and move on.

No dickhead, people like you need to stop bitching at other reader's comments.Everybody has an idea of what is good erotica, so if it doesn't trip their wire, so what? Why get your ass in an uproar over another reader's opinion. You seem to be one of those guys who's into wimp ass cuckold stories, good for you. Don't like another comments? Solution? Don't fucking read them. End of comment.

You clearly have quite a talent for this genre! Would love to read a continuation of this one, but also can't wait to see how "Never Bet with your Heart" progresses...

Smoke another cock you cum-gulping retard.

Hot story and enjoyable read.

Looking forward th aditional chapters.

Joe

Go fuck yourselves you retards. You sound like cum sucking asses who get their feeding from the whores you call wives.

really good story so far. F the Trolls, funny how they all have shit to say, but have never written anything.

Thanks again.

A little overdue perhaps???

OK, its really good, chapter 3 the confrontation, lets not make the husband a wimp ok, yes he should have barged out and put a stop to everything once he saw the porch make out session. I always believe that a man is a man and must fight for everything he has. Home, family wife and children. This is one time friends or not, that friend crossed the line and so did his wife. What was he going to do... man up and deal with it then and now. even if it means going into the bathroom.. if she argued and put up her own ideas of approval of herself, she can sleep on the couch. No doubt if rolls were reversed he would be on the couch or outside. Lets see chapter 3

You don't write a complete story, with an ending, DON'T POST IT! Manure pile.

He should take a baseball bat to his old friends balls! Then get his wife in control or kick her to the curb! BOTH OF THEM CHEATED ON HIM!

Another "I was too shocked, or too curious, or too angry, or too stupid to get up and stop them" cliche. Sure, the wife is a cheater and his friend is an asshole, but the husband is a mega-wimp. He will go through life muttering to himself ,"I shoulda…coulda…woulda…."

Cheating wife...a wife that cheat doesn't respect her husband...cheating friend...to have a friend like this better to have a enemy...why he didn't know what to do is something i can't understand...both of them out of his house in that instant...

I understand now why this story ended here....

I don't know who is more stupid! The author of this story or me for wasting my time reading it! What a dumb fucker she is married to.

hope there is a part 3

"LawrenceVIII" wish part 3...Only if it is about divorce and revenge...two cheaters...

I hate little punk jack offs.yuck.

Enough of this "happily married but husband turns cuck" shit!

Why the fuck didn't the wimp break it up as soon as he realized what was happening?

Why did the twat let Tony Big Dick cum in her ,knowing that she was unprotected? (Supposedly she loved her husband and wanted a baby with him)

Why did Tony Big Dick turn on his old friend and fuck his wife?

I'm not even going to suggest divorce or murder because this type of horseshit belongs in its own category,"Sick Cucks"

always have the guy watch for a half hour or so. Why hide? THAT has to be the dumbest idea for a story there is. Why not go in and beat the living shit out of that fucking asshole and that slut he calls a wife? Why the fuck would you hide? Just anther stupid story.

faggotry.???? Is that en a word? Gave this a 5

How cuckold haters will still read through two chapters, beating the hell out of their meat and then at the end, talk about how much they hated it.

BULLSHIT!!

Everytime I read those remarks, I know how much they were fantasizing that it was them. Otherwise, they wouldn't have read it.

Dicksuckers

I think he was just having a dream about his wife and his suppoded to be big dicked friend. But he will be wondering if it really happened or not.

He doesn't have proof so he needs to invite Tony back over and insist that he spends the night and then he can take and record the events after they think he's sleeping.

But if he's too scared to find out, tell me how to get a hold of Tony and I'll invite him to my house so I can go to bed, and leave my wife in capable hands.

I'll even record my wife riding on Tony's big dick and unlike him when my comes in the room I'll ask her where she's been, and when she tells me they've been talking I'll have her lay down and then I'll tell her that ok and then I'll slide down her body and I will then tell her that I seen how much talking they did. Then I will eat her cum filled cheating married cunt, and tell her after I'm done that I just wanted proof of the cheating she did.

Then the next night I'll have Tony stay again, because that's why we read these stories, because we want to watch our wife's getting fucked by a big dick and then we can enjoy her cum filled cheating cunt.

Continue this soon pleasee! Loved it !!

Gets.....a 1 !!!

I liked the scene where Jill and Tony smoke a joint...and a joint. Thought it was highly original and erotic. Sex and dope, made for each other.

I am no typical cuckold haters. I saw one of my friends killed himself because of an unfaithful wife. I don't get a hard on. I feel a cold, cold hatred. It could have been me.

I swore that I wil not off myself

Seducers have parents, they don't have to live longer.

They have brothers and sisters, they don't have live longer, either.

They wives and children, .....

Did she have his baby

Now pregnant is he going to raise another mans bastard. Plus she can't stop fucking him now. Marriage over story sucks chucky author who never finished this shit story.

...chuck stories under this same plot-line. Overdone, done too many times (to the point of being trite), although a good way to test ones writing chops in the cuckold slice of the LW pie. I just didn't see anything new or significant here....and find myself waiting for the other shoe to drop.

Indeed what will he do tomorrow?

A dude I went to school with is serving 20 to life for offing his whore wife and one of her lovers (customers?) when he found them in his bed together. Now that's trite!

But while his life suck, she'll never cheat again. I'd say that was decisive and served honest justice.

So. You write pretty well. You could do with better character development and trying out driving off the main roads a bit. This rehashing of too often repeated story-lines isn't as entertaining as one might think.

If anything, I'd like to see another episode to see what hubby does next. Will he be a wimp cuckold, allowing wifey to have endless days and nights riding Tony's giant cock? Surely, she will become pregnant by him. Will she prove to be a slut, a whore and confront him with the live with it or leave scene, or will she prove to be more normal and rational and, growing guilty as the sex becomes more routine, ask for a divorce? Will she decide she's had her fling and come back to hubby, asking that they "go back to the way it was"?

Will he dispose of the asshole and his now cock-addicted wife, or just throw them out, file for divorce, and move on. Or will he BTB and lover boy? Will he protect himself before he gets raped in court, as well as in his love-life?

Well, it seems you have some work to do, if you are to resolve the current, and in my mind, impossible situation.

Good luck.

Please put some thought into something different to bend your impressive skill towards. This was....sad.

Great cum shot story xoxoxoxo Annette

divorce the cunt.........betraying her husband like that

pathetic cuck shit.

Just a word of note: all of those negative comments were written by ONE sad little man. He trolls these stories and posts his hatred to every story where the wife has sex with others. Once you realize just how sad that is that he spends hours every day posting these, you begin to feel sorry for him and only hope he dies a semi painful death.

This has the potential to really become a good story let’s keep it up.

Also, now that the troll has stated the reason he posts all his comment about cheating wives is that his “friend” killed himself over one. He spouts off about the husbands being weak wimps but it would appear it was his friend who was weak. The husbands seem to be the real men who deal with it and life. But you need to know something, your comments do not change anyone’s mind about this. You are simply wasting your time and just giving yourself high blood pressure. Not one person other than your multiple aliases even gives a rats ass what you have to say. I’m glad that the authors in this section are beginning to delete your nonsense. Go volunteer at a suicide prevention hot line if you really want to do good, as right here you are simply ranting to people who think you are a complete and total nut job.

This really is some fag cuck shit. I mean you see fag cuck shit on all kinds of stories whether it is or not. This REALLY is some fag cuck shit.

Angsty, first-time cuckolding, in the classic sense of the word, or nearly so.

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I've never said this. But this was really cuck shit.

Learning to be a cuckold is just like anything else. Most of us timidly let our wife know we are turned on with the idea of her getting involved with someone else. Once they have that knowledge their inner slut starts working on them and eventually she runs into an opportunity for strange cock - by then she is ready and once the first man nails her, she is even easier for the next horny man who comes along. Soon she is spreading her legs on a regular basis and is one of the easy fucks us men dream about. Over the years my own wife has blossomed, she went from a somewhat introverted lady in her 50's to a normal, well adjusted, self confident wife who is a joy to be around. There must be something ego boosting about meeting horny strangers just about every week who admire and appreciate a cock loving woman who desire her. Many men have been pumping her full of self confidence for many years now and a happy wife makes for a happy life - I'm glad I got her started.

No such thing idiot! His response was that of a true cuckold hubby – he came across people he truly cared about indulging themselves naturally. In fact, their fucking behavior seems a lot more natural and normal than your hysterical rant. It is always interesting to hear the story of a woman taking ownership of her precious cunt. My own wife has always been appreciative that she was shared with dozens of horny men.

Definitely needs a finish here. Excellent stories!!!

This was only 2/3 of a story. What happened?

Good writing. Could be a seriously good work with a quality conclusion which you have done with at least one of your other tales.

Certainly the magical big cock thing is a stretch, but I guess this is an erotic fiction site. :) I'm in the top 2-3% in size but have have yet to find one of these automatically orgasmic size queens which seem to be prevalent on Lit. As a guy blessed with size, it gets a little old reading about how impressed all these women are supposed to be. You small to average guys need to quit obsessing over it.

Love the details but you don’t have a real conclusion. I want to know how it started, and how the marriage survives, if it survives.

Part 3?

It has been about 9 years and no part 3. So far so good, need more details how it came about.

Thank youi

Sexy storey but needs a conclusion.

Punt

A good 4 star read, but its not finished. I'm not a writer but wonder how long would it of taken to of made these two parts longer?

Excellent!!!!!

Good 4 stad story.

My thought i think he should of turned the intercom off and not let his wife and friend know. After all although he enjoyed what he hated to see, and the two sides of what he emotionally felt. I think the cheating freed him to see and hear for himself the truth of his wife's and friends feelings. Letting her know he may never get to know the whole truth.

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Not only terribly sad but bad writing, too! We’re not given any information that would explain the tiniest bit of motivation for his wife and his friend to betray him that way. It just happens as though it’s all in a vacuum. It’s not the least bit erotic. It’s just a short story about a couple of despicable people who decide to destroy a friendship and a marriage for seemingly no good reason.