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Great read, can't wait for the future hubby gets involved! I would like to see him in a situation where Vivian attracts the attention of another male, hmmmm. Thanks. M.
As usual you didn't dissapoint :-) Very good read. i hope gabriel gets in it soon i'm getting impatient lol Anyway can't wait for the next chapter thanks again for a great read
Once Again.....
While I am one of your avid readers I am remiss in sharing how much I love your story. Until recently I have been rather quite regarding my feelings on the stories I truly follow and love. However recent negative feedback on some of my favorite authors have caused me to reconsider. I think the saying is true...you share your negative responses to at least 10 people (remember that Suave Shampoo commercial....and so on and so on) and hardly every complement those you love/like. Please accept my apologizes for not commenting sooner.
I do have one question....what is Mrs. Banks background I don't recall any specifics is she a submissive? I know she lost her husband but don't recall if you have share more than that. Nothing major - just a curiosity.
Please keep doing what you are doing - you tell a wonderful story
Very Enjoyable
I'm enjoying this series very much. You weave a good tale and set a believable tone. I do have a quibble. It's getting a bit repetitive - and a tiny bit tedious. I think we can stipulate to some of the training regimen and move ahead in the story. In today's story, the only new element was the finger in the ass - and you gave that away in the subtitle. I like the ritual and propriety of the action - but the danger is the repetition. Maybe the balance needs adjusting. Not sure.
wonderful
just amazing, thank you, can't wait for the Earl to join in.
Question...once married training from the school will be over, will the story continue with the Earl training and/or will you write about married life?
I will be sorry to hear the story end at school/wedding. I think of "Mastering Bella" going into "Owning Bella" and wonder if you will go something similar?
Plotline for Marriage Training
Soo.... for Marriage Training. I will have at least one chapter about their marriage here on Lit... I'm also considering turning this series into a book like I did with Venus School for Sex and that would definitely have more about their marriage post-School (as well as other extras). =) But yeah, there'll be at least one Lit chapter about their wedding / honeymoon, and the Earl is going to become involved in Vivian's training before 'graduation.' I'm rather looking forward to it =)
Also, I know that some of the recent chapters have been a bit repetitive in terms of the training she's receiving and there's several reasons for that, but I can assure you that her third week of training is going to have some very new things for her, especially after her weekend where she's pretty much left to her own devices ;)
oh i can't wait :-) you know i'm most looking forward to gabriel becoming involved. anyway please hurry i love this story and can't wait for more
So excited
Can't wait for the next chapter, and love the idea of looking into their married life. Thanks for another great chapter!
Fantastic!
Thank you for writing this... incredibly hot. I can't wait for the next chapters, and looking into their marriage! I love the juxtaposition between strict monogamy and deep pleasure.
Fantastic!
I discovered this series today and have completely lost my afternoon. Please tell me there will be figging involved at some point.
Figging
Anonymous - I actually had almost forgotten about figging! Since it was used quite often in the Victorian era - in fact, I THINK that's where it started? - I should definitely include it =) Thanks for the reminder! I'm glad that you're enjoying the series so far. I'm almost done with Chapter 9 and should be submitting it very soon!
lol
i had to google figging. that would be a perfact addition to her punishments. this is such an awesome. thanks again for writing it :-)
Marriage Training CH8
I am moving along with the training and enjoying where the story is progressing.
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